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Saturday, October 7, 2017

THE DEAL

#FRIDAYFOTOFICTION (OCT 07, 2017)



‘Please don’t choose such open coffee shops if you want to meet me again', she tried to hide her face.

‘I’m sorry, so what have you decided, are you ok with the deal’, he asked.

‘Look, just for once, and I am doing this only for money. Promise me after that you will not try to meet me again.'

‘Yeah, I promise.’

‘One more thing, I want all the money in Advance.’

‘Ok, no problem.’

‘Ok then will come tomorrow at 7’, she said and got up to leave the place. ‘One last question, may I ask’, she added.

‘Yes! Please go ahead.’

‘We have a long age difference, you can get any girl, why me?’

‘I just want to fulfill my desire’, he replied.

‘And your wife.’

‘You don’t worry, I will handle her.’

‘Ok’, she said, and went.

Congratulations!!! We have got the Surrogate Mother’, he dialed his wife’s number and informed.


-By Gaurav Yadav

This post is part of #FridayFotoFiction held by Tina and Mayuri





17 comments:

  1. First I thought the deal is slithery and the last line took it to firmer ground! Amazing concept!
    -Anagha from Team MocktailMommmies

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  2. Liked the last twist. Nice take on the prompt

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    1. Thank you so much Gayatri. I'm happy that you liked the story.

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  3. Oh My God, Gaurav!! Your imagination just amazes me....very different & Imaginative take on the prompt!!

    Prasanna from Team Mocktailmommies

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    1. Just trying to write something different and I am glad that I could do it. Thank you for reading :)

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  4. Never thought its about surrogacy nice one Gaurav

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  5. I actually thought he was hiring her as a date for a day. Didn't expect the ending.

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    1. I wanted to write something with an unexpected ending and this happened. thank you for reading.

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  6. The reval in the nd packed a punch! Another awesome story from you, Gaurav!
    Thank you for writing for #FridayFotoFiction

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  7. That was a superb take. Totally unexpected. I appreciate and respect surrogacy. It gives so many women the opportunity to become a mother. Although, adoption is a noble way too, surrogacy gives one a part of them. Great story. Cheers! :)

    Rashi Mital
    Live It Young

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  8. Very different story on the prompt. It is really beautiful

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  9. Thank you so much Monika. Thank you for reading.

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  10. I thought it was going the 50 Shades way!!! Wonderful Gaurav. Thanks for linking up with #FridayFotoFiction.

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