#FRIDAYFOTOFICTION (OCT 07, 2017)
‘Please don’t choose
such open coffee shops if you want to meet me again', she tried to hide her
face.
‘I’m sorry, so what
have you decided, are you ok with the deal’, he asked.
‘Look, just for once, and
I am doing this only for money. Promise me after that you will not try to meet
me again.'
‘Yeah, I promise.’
‘One more thing, I want
all the money in Advance.’
‘Ok, no problem.’
‘Ok then will come tomorrow
at 7’, she said and got up to leave the place. ‘One last question, may I ask’,
she added.
‘Yes! Please go ahead.’
‘We have a long age
difference, you can get any girl, why me?’
‘I just want to fulfill
my desire’, he replied.
‘And your wife.’
‘You don’t worry, I
will handle her.’
‘Ok’, she said, and
went.
‘Congratulations!!! We have got the Surrogate Mother’, he dialed his
wife’s number and informed.
-By Gaurav Yadav
First I thought the deal is slithery and the last line took it to firmer ground! Amazing concept!
ReplyDelete-Anagha from Team MocktailMommmies
Thank you Anagha.
DeleteLiked the last twist. Nice take on the prompt
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Gayatri. I'm happy that you liked the story.
DeleteOh My God, Gaurav!! Your imagination just amazes me....very different & Imaginative take on the prompt!!
ReplyDeletePrasanna from Team Mocktailmommies
Just trying to write something different and I am glad that I could do it. Thank you for reading :)
DeleteNever thought its about surrogacy nice one Gaurav
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteI actually thought he was hiring her as a date for a day. Didn't expect the ending.
ReplyDeleteI wanted to write something with an unexpected ending and this happened. thank you for reading.
DeleteThe reval in the nd packed a punch! Another awesome story from you, Gaurav!
ReplyDeleteThank you for writing for #FridayFotoFiction
Thank you :)
DeleteThat was a superb take. Totally unexpected. I appreciate and respect surrogacy. It gives so many women the opportunity to become a mother. Although, adoption is a noble way too, surrogacy gives one a part of them. Great story. Cheers! :)
ReplyDeleteRashi Mital
Live It Young
Means a lot. thank you for reading )
DeleteVery different story on the prompt. It is really beautiful
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Monika. Thank you for reading.
ReplyDeleteI thought it was going the 50 Shades way!!! Wonderful Gaurav. Thanks for linking up with #FridayFotoFiction.
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